Small Moments 生活小故事

Great Class
Dec 2, 2015
1 min read

In November, our second graders have created their own small moments stories. We have done a good job in writing with focus and detail.

在十一月，二年级小朋友创作了自己的生活小故事。我们的作文有重点，有细节，我们真棒！

We planed our writing by generating a list of seed ideas which are meaningful to us. We then chose one idea to zoom in. We outlined the story by using sequence words. We then added details using dialogue, action and feeling. We even edited and evaluated our stories using different checklist.

为了计划写作，我们把生活中有意义的小故事列了一个单子。我们然后选择一个小故事来放大。我们用顺序词来立提纲。接着我们给小故事加上细节，包括动作、话语和心情。我们甚至还用检查单独立的编辑和评估自己的故事。

To celebrate our accomplishment, we had a publishing party before Thanksgiving. We were happy to have parents and classmates give comments to our small moment stories. These comments are really helpful for our writing in the future. This is our first narrative writing in second grade! We are so proud of our stories!!

为了庆祝我们的成就，我们在感恩节前夕举办了作品发表会。我们很开心家长和同学可以为我们写点评。这些点评对我们未来的写作很有帮助。这是我们二年级第一次写记叙文！我们为自己的小故事感到无比骄傲！！